"Whiteshadow will be moving to the Elder's Den! She has served this clan well and it is time she retires!" Dawnstar mewed on top of the Tall Stone. "Also, I would like to appoint a Head Warrior!" she said. The clan cheered. (If you want to be Head Warrior, comment on this post and write a poem that rhymes, I will view the entries and pick the one I like best!) "I will decide who shortly!" Dawnstar told the eager clan.
"There will also be a new Apprentice!" Dawnstar yowled and the mewed, "Spottedkit, step forward." Spottedkit wriggled with excitement, while Mudkit watched sadly. "Spottedkit, will you train hard to protect this clan?" Dawnstar asked. "I will" Spottedkit squeaked out. "Then from this day until you recieve your Warrior name, you shall be known as Spottedpaw!" Dawnstar said to the bouncing ball of fur. She continued, "Your mentor will be...Faithleaf! Faithleaf pass on all you know to this Apprentice!" The clan cheered "Spottedpaw, Spottedpaw!" and after a while Dawnstar silenced them with her tail.
These are the cats going to the gathering:
Dawnstar
Shadowfang
Leopardpaw
Tallfur
Wildblaze
Faithleaf
Everblossom
Riverfrost
Flamefall
Silverflight
Snowfrost
Moonshine
Lunabreeze
Sunpaw
Spottedpaw
(I will update the site with Spottedpaw and Whiteshadow and everything later)
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Mudkit was sitting down next to his mother. He sighed, and padded next to Spottedpaw. He tried to look happy, but he just couldn't. "Umm, congrats......" Mudkit said quietly while looking down at his paws.
Hi ummm, I won't be able to make the gathering tonight.
Sorry (You should send Hailpaw :)
Mudkit was very angry! He knew Spottedkit was going to the gathering, and not with him! Mudkit remembered in the nursery when they did everything together, like play-fighting, talking, and sleeping together. Mudkit raced in the nursery, not waiting for Spottedkit to answer his first question.
DAISY
Daisy is lazy,
Sleeps and eats,
Plays in many ways,
Tug-of-war,
Walks,
Daisy is lazy,
At most times in the day.
SUMMER
Summer is fun,
Swimming in pools,
Playing all day,
No school,
Instead pools,
No homework to do,
Just relax and nap,
Take a trip,
To oceans,
Or cruises,
Summer is fun.
DREAMING
Dreaming is fun,
Battle in paddles,
Race on faces,
Surf makes you burp,
Walking is talking,
Dreaming is strange and fun.
Cat: Tallfur
Other: Pick which one you like best for entering!
(last post is SpottedPAW, not kit)
Example Model Poem:
A silver wood lay in morning mist,
Glittering against the morning light.
Spring was near to come and kiss,
The icy ground that awoke from night.
A lone dappled pelt searches the snow,
Glowing against the dawn.
The others await for the silver to go,
and so on walks the lonely fawn.
Details(I forgot this, so if you already did your poem you can remake one): It must rhyme. Can be ABAB or AABB form(My poem was ABAB). Use must use full sentences.
If you have questions, ask them on the c-box.
(And must have 8 lines like mine at least!)
DREAMING
Dreaming is fun,
You can eat buns,
Battle,
With Paddles,
Race on faces,
Walking is talking,
Look at the sky,
While playing dye(dice)
You can eat a buffet,
Or even all day,
In the dream,
Your room has a theme,
Or your car,
Caught a char,
When you are ready for bed,
Your toys come to life,
Right when you close your eyes....
Dreamnig is strange and fun.
(still Tallfur, and is this one good enough?)
Longer sentences please! Thanks Amberstar!
Oh, darn....
NIGHT-TIME
The night is full of wonder,
When a cat is about to catch a deer, it ponders,
Wondering what to do,
Catch or leave it in the yew,
And let it die,
Next to Two-leg pie,
The cat has an idea,
It's gonna act like a hyena,
Kill it nice any easy,
Squeeze into it's flesh,
Is the cats idea,
So it climbs up a tree,
And spots a bee,
The bee stings the cat,
Making the cat screetch,
Scaring the prey away.
(is THIS one better!?!?!?!?)
A few typos, but it is good(You do not have to fix the typos)
A Summer Breeze
In the afternoon of a new day,
A child sleeps in the hay.
Overhead, the birds gracefully soar,
And and a mother opens a door.
Some kids swim in a lake,
The rest all take a break.
The dogs run around,
And the circus comes to town.
~Brightstar
They were both good and this was REALLY close, but I will have to actually choose one so, it will be...Wildblaze!(I looked at pairs of rhymes and had to examine them SUPER closely to choose. Sorry Tallfur, maybe later on another of your cats could be Head Warrior!)
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